Comments on: Simon Moth Critiques My Essay And Still I Live To Tell The Tale, Or This Is How My Writer’s Workshop Is Going, Part II http://hannihaus.com/2010/03/18/simon-moth-critiques-my-essay-and-still-i-live-to-tell-the-tale-or-this-is-how-my-writers-workshop-is-going-part-ii/ German for "totally awesome blog!" Fri, 02 Dec 2011 20:25:41 +0000 hourly 1 http://wordpress.org/?v=3.3.2 By: iraynay http://hannihaus.com/2010/03/18/simon-moth-critiques-my-essay-and-still-i-live-to-tell-the-tale-or-this-is-how-my-writers-workshop-is-going-part-ii/comment-page-1/#comment-15350 iraynay Sat, 20 Mar 2010 05:48:22 +0000 http://hannihaus.com/?p=3463#comment-15350 Oh, I love how you break on Miriam's line like that - she's the best. Ah, Mr. Moth. Just subtract him from the equation and what do you have? Ten people who loved your essay! Oh, I love how you break on Miriam’s line like that – she’s the best. Ah, Mr. Moth. Just subtract him from the equation and what do you have? Ten people who loved your essay!

]]> By: Jonathan http://hannihaus.com/2010/03/18/simon-moth-critiques-my-essay-and-still-i-live-to-tell-the-tale-or-this-is-how-my-writers-workshop-is-going-part-ii/comment-page-1/#comment-15334 Jonathan Fri, 19 Mar 2010 16:15:16 +0000 http://hannihaus.com/?p=3463#comment-15334 Hear, hear! Everyone who has responded already said what I would have. Somehow I don't think that'll stop me from commenting. ;) Some folks don't understand what the constructive part of constructive criticism is about... Had Master Moth said something like, "I didn't like this part... here's what I would have done, and here are some things to consider..." I would have taken him seriously. It sounds like he's happy just to piss on whatever anyone produces. He's a troll. Time to put up the blinders. :) Hear, hear! Everyone who has responded already said what I would have. Somehow I don’t think that’ll stop me from commenting. ;)

Some folks don’t understand what the constructive part of constructive criticism is about… Had Master Moth said something like, “I didn’t like this part… here’s what I would have done, and here are some things to consider…” I would have taken him seriously. It sounds like he’s happy just to piss on whatever anyone produces.

He’s a troll. Time to put up the blinders. :)

]]> By: Carolyn Critz http://hannihaus.com/2010/03/18/simon-moth-critiques-my-essay-and-still-i-live-to-tell-the-tale-or-this-is-how-my-writers-workshop-is-going-part-ii/comment-page-1/#comment-15320 Carolyn Critz Fri, 19 Mar 2010 00:06:21 +0000 http://hannihaus.com/?p=3463#comment-15320 Don't insult the innocent moths! Methinks HE thinks he is the Simon Cowell of the class. Glad he dumped first - got it out of the way. Now write on! Don’t insult the innocent moths! Methinks HE thinks he is the Simon Cowell of the class. Glad he dumped first – got it out of the way. Now write on!

]]> By: Kerri Anne http://hannihaus.com/2010/03/18/simon-moth-critiques-my-essay-and-still-i-live-to-tell-the-tale-or-this-is-how-my-writers-workshop-is-going-part-ii/comment-page-1/#comment-15316 Kerri Anne Thu, 18 Mar 2010 18:39:26 +0000 http://hannihaus.com/?p=3463#comment-15316 I love this. And I would love to read that essay. You know, if you're sharing. (No pressure. Ever.) I love this. And I would love to read that essay. You know, if you’re sharing. (No pressure. Ever.)

]]> By: jamie http://hannihaus.com/2010/03/18/simon-moth-critiques-my-essay-and-still-i-live-to-tell-the-tale-or-this-is-how-my-writers-workshop-is-going-part-ii/comment-page-1/#comment-15314 jamie Thu, 18 Mar 2010 17:50:50 +0000 http://hannihaus.com/?p=3463#comment-15314 Because I'm all judgmental and s**t, i will happily point out that the man's last name is MOTH. a giant, hairy, dumb bug. you go, brave Hanni! Because I’m all judgmental and s**t, i will happily point out that the man’s last name is MOTH. a giant, hairy, dumb bug. you go, brave Hanni!

]]> By: mmat http://hannihaus.com/2010/03/18/simon-moth-critiques-my-essay-and-still-i-live-to-tell-the-tale-or-this-is-how-my-writers-workshop-is-going-part-ii/comment-page-1/#comment-15313 mmat Thu, 18 Mar 2010 17:45:28 +0000 http://hannihaus.com/?p=3463#comment-15313 don't worry aboot simon moth. he probably enjoys the smell of his own farts. don’t worry aboot simon moth. he probably enjoys the smell of his own farts.

]]> By: Erin http://hannihaus.com/2010/03/18/simon-moth-critiques-my-essay-and-still-i-live-to-tell-the-tale-or-this-is-how-my-writers-workshop-is-going-part-ii/comment-page-1/#comment-15312 Erin Thu, 18 Mar 2010 17:34:22 +0000 http://hannihaus.com/?p=3463#comment-15312 He's just a negative presence. Please don't take anything he has to say to heart. Having suffered through many writing critiques in college (both good and horrifyingly bad) I can attest to the fact that there's always one super asshole in the bunch whose only goal is to bring the other writers down. That being said, I hope he chokes on those cookies next week too. He’s just a negative presence. Please don’t take anything he has to say to heart. Having suffered through many writing critiques in college (both good and horrifyingly bad) I can attest to the fact that there’s always one super asshole in the bunch whose only goal is to bring the other writers down.

That being said, I hope he chokes on those cookies next week too.

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